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2010年全国各地18套高考英语书面表达试题及参考范文
    1.全国I卷
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Ms. Smith,
 
 
With best wishes,
Li Hua
内容要点:
1.自我介绍   2.邀请做评委    3.演讲主题   4.比赛时间    5.参赛选手   6.联系方式
【参考范文】
Dear Ms. Smith,
I'm Li Hua , the chair of the Students’ Union of Yucca Middle School , which is close to your university . I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15 . It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you . Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions .
I am looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes,
Li Hua
 
2.全国II卷
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需要招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:
教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等
授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)
工作量:每周12学时,任先三门课 ;担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)
注意:
词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
开关语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China .                        
                                                                            
Best,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China . Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students . If you come , you can choose three of the following four courses : Speaking , Writing , Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week . The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences . Besides teaching , you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper .
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions . I’d be more than happy to help .
Best,
Li Hua
 
3.北京卷
书面表达(共两节,35分)第一节情景作文(20分)
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
    注意:1.周记的开头已为你写好。www.ks5u.com/gaokao/beijing
   2.词数不少于60。www.ks5u.com/gaokao/bei
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Bedside. www.ks5u.com/gaokao/beijing
基本分析:
1. 文体:周记。    2. 人称:I         3. 时态:一般过去时
4. 事件大意:我为爷爷奶奶准备出行+我送行    5. 图片要素:
图一:查询信息(train ticket, weather, hotel)   图二:买票(buy ticket)
图三:准备行装(package)                 图四:送行(see-off)
3. 图片关联:
图一、二、三都是并列关系,主题是旅游前的准备阶段,三幅图没有轻重之分,所占篇幅比例相当。图四是最后的送别阶段,文章末尾要有点睛之笔,可以是送别感受,对爷爷奶奶的祝福,也可以是自己的成长和收获。
4. 文章立意:今年的作文和90后的学生特点相联系,积极引导高中学生要培养独立性,增加实践能力,并要照顾体谅长辈。所以文章末尾的立意也可以往这方面考虑。
【参考范文】
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Bedside. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Bedside, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
 第二节开放作文(15分) 请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。www.ks5u.com/gaoka
     In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
 
基本分析:
1. 三分之一描写要点:阳光,楼(很靠近),弯曲的树。(the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree)
2. 三分之二议论着眼立意:
—— 1.人生角度:在成长的道路上(树的成长),有曲折,有困难,(建筑的阻挡,弯曲)但是只要向着光明和希望(太阳)去努力拼搏,坚持不懈,还是能够冲破桎梏取得成功(树在楼的夹缝中长高了,超出建筑)。
—— 2.和谐角度: 城市的发展(建筑)和环境的可持续发展(树的成长)要协调,要平衡,才能欣然共存(在阳光下)
3. 立意与现实生活关系:1. 引导90后要具有积极的生活态度,生活非一帆风顺的。2. 扣住低碳生活的环保热点,城市和环境的和谐发展也是低碳生活的必需。
【参考范文】
In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does。
 
4.福建卷
 假设你是李华,福建省某中学高中学生,今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE“的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份,根据以下图片提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。 K^S*5U.C#O
注意:
1.根据图片的内容适当展开,以使行文连贯; 2 .开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;           4.词数:120左右 K^S*5U.C#O%
参考词汇:短缺 shortage ; 资源 resource
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning , I’m Li Hua from Fujian , China , It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it .
__________________________________________________________                                                                   That’s all. Thank you.
【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的发言稿,是半开放性的试题。对此试题的写作,应从以下几个方面进行关注:一:试题给出的图片中的内容要点提示我们写作的重点,应围绕其展开,并注意文章的逻辑性和段落层次性;二:注意写作时的身份限制,切记不能透露自身的具体信息;三、发言稿要有总结,且一定要简练有力,切中要点
【范文点评】文章要点齐全,写作层次清楚,很好地将具体提供的信息进行了展示,并进行了总结。第二段引起话题,突出重点,如Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it;第三段按照提示层层将试题所要求知识点展开,显得条理清楚,叙述合理得当;第四段总结言简意赅,紧扣主题。同时,文章还注重了句式的多样化,如:简单句,并列句,以及非限定性定语从句的使用等。当然,本文在过渡上衔接自然,尤其是一些过渡词的使用,如:Therefore,Firstly,In conclusion等,显示了较强的语言功底和运用能力
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,
高考资源网
Good morning . I’m Li Hua from Fujian , China . It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it .
高考资源网
As we know , the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming , environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population . Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it.
高考资源网
Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use . Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, it’s everyone’s responsibility to make good use of water , such as recycling and saving water in our daily life .
高考资源网
In conclusion , people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically .
高考资源网
That’s all . Thank you.
 
5.广东卷高考资源网
 
以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。

    容:公共场所禁烟
实施时间:2011年1月1日起
实施范围:全国
    标:所有室内公共场所无烟 w_w w. k#s5_u.c o*m
 
    施:张贴禁烟标志W_w w.k*s*5 u.c@o m
相关数据:
(1)吸烟人数:约3.5亿
(2)分    布:男性75%;女性:25%
(3)受二手烟影响人数:约5.4亿
(4)因二手烟死亡人数:超过10万/年W_w w.k*s*5 u.c@o m

二手烟:second-hand smoke
[写作内容]
请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:
1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;   2.目标和措施;   3.相关数据。
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】(1 )
The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country .This decision , which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free , will come into effect from the first day of 2011 .To this end , no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places . Currently China has about 350 million smokers , among whom 75% are men and 25% women .Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke , which causes 100000 deaths per year.
 
【参考范文】(2 )
The Chinese government has decided that smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country .This decision , which will be carried out from January 1 , 2011 , aims to bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment .In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places .Statistics show that China has approximately 350000000 smokers , among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women . Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke , causing 100000 deaths a year.@(
 
【参考范文】(3 )
W_w w.k*s*5 u.c@o mMy country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st,2011.The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second smoke .
 
6.湖北卷
请你根据以下提示,结合生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈微笑的作用。
The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.
注意:①无须写标题; ②内容只需涉及一个方面;  ③词数为100左右。
【参考范文】( 1 )
I still remember how serious I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class . The teacher spoke English throughout the class , which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before.
In the morning class the next day , the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students . After listening to me for a while , she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much . The smile shone on the whole day and the following days . A week later , I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.
Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class , I began to be confident .
 
【参考范文】(2 )
No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. Sometimes when a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage.
A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan / overtook Wenchuan. Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness.
It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.
 
7.湖南卷
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
    假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部,开展了为期两个月的活动。现在,你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流,请写一篇英语发言稿,主要内容如下:
1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动:
2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。
    注意:
    1.词数不少于120个;      2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
Today I’ll talk about our English club .Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon . So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , including a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students . Last week we held an English story-telling competition .We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes .Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Bing won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English , but also it brought them much fun .They hope many such activities can be held .
That’s all . Thank you .
 
8.江苏卷
假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”,请你根据下表所提示的信息,用英语
写一篇发言稿,简单介绍自己英语学习的情况,并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

 
 
自己英语学习的情况
1.英语学习的目的
2.英语学习的方法
3.课外自学的途径 w_w w. k#s5_u.c o*m
 
……….
对学校英语教学的建议
(请考生根据自己的经历与感想,提出两至三点建议)。

 
    注意:
    1.对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
    2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计人总词数。
    3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
 Dear teachers and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you .                           
Thank you for listening .
【参考范文】
Dear teachers and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you . I'm interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the future . Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well . As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language , just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class .I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio . Besides , I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
 Now , I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school . Firstly , we should be given more opportunities to use what  we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it . Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them . Finally ,1 suggest we have more English activities,such as English contests and festivals .
Thank you for listening .                              (150words)
 
9.江西卷
英语中“please. ” “thank you” “sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊,改善关系、化解矛盾等神奇的力量,因而被称为“magic words”。请 “Magic Power of Polite Words”为题写一篇100词左右的英语作文。体裁不限(叙述文、议论文、说明文……)
【参考范文】
Magic Power of Polite Words
   We use magic words in our daily life without realizing it . These magic words , for instance “please” “thank you “ “sorry” , can add luster to our life .
   Magic words can help build friendship . They make you polite and easier to get along with , thus strengthen the relationship between you and others .
   Once you offend someone else , you can as well use these words . A word such as “sorry” will make him less annoyed .
   Try using polite words every now and then . Once you do , you will never find yourself drained of energy for life . You use polite words , in return , these words will provide you with magic power .
10.辽宁卷
你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问,请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。内容主要包括:
——母语是英语,汉语流利者优先
——解答用语学习问题,协助组织英语活动
——每周4小时,报酬面议
——联系人:李华(Tel:13011223344)
注意:1。词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.启事标题和结尾已为你写好。
【参考范文】
English Advisor Wanted
   The Students’ Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term . The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English , answering their questions , and helping organize activities such as singing English songs , English evenings , or lectures on interesting topics .
The applicant should be a native speaker of English . Fluency in Chinese is preferred . The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week .
If you are interested , please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview . Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview .
                                                        Students’ Union
Yucai High School
 
11.安徽卷
假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动,征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中,放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?”为题,写一篇英语短文。
注意:1.字数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【解题指导】这是一篇半开放式的作文,考生有发挥的余地。考生应注意审题准确,要求选择放弃其中的一个,这就要求考生写前列举出放弃的理由,用适当的连接词将理由巧妙地连起来,使行文流畅,同时也要注意长短句结合并使用高级词汇,以提高文章的档次。
【参考范文】
We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the Web are widely used . It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them .
However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy , and there’re too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.
As for cells and the Web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch
with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .
【范文点评】
本文层次清晰。第一段提出了文章的主题,第二段提出放弃的选择并阐述理由,第三段
说明了保留另外两个选项的原因,这三段用了连词however , as for 使段落衔接自然。
在文章中,作者用了定语从句 in which TV , cells….、虚拟语气、rather than 、原因状语从句等复杂的句式 ,句子长短结合,语言流畅,充分展示了作者写作功底。
 
12.山东卷
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:
1. 表示歉意; 2. 解释原因;    3. 另约时间。
注意:1. 词数120~150;   2. 可适当增加细节。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
    I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened .
    Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family . You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year .
    I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .Once again ,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused .
                                                              Sincerely yours, 
                                                              Li Hua
 
13.陕西卷
假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。
       写作要点:
       1.对她表达感谢之意;                        2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;
       3.希望了解她的近况。                     
       要求:
       1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。           2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
       3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。        4.书写须清晰、工整。
       5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
【参考范文】
       Dear Sure,
       I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China . It’s almost a month since you left us . We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together .
       We are busy as usual . We had an English speech contest the other day . I won the first prize ! This again reminds me of all your kind help . Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school ? Yesterday , we went there and watered them . The tree you planted yourself is growing well , and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood . Will you come back to see Sue Wood ?
       How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students . Hope to keep in close touch .
All the best
                                                                   Li Hua
 
14.四川卷
假定你校将举行一个成人仪式,你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。w_w*w.k_s*5_u.c_o m
1.过去对成年的向往;2.现在的感受和认识;3.将来的目标及措施。
参考词汇:责任 responsibility
注意:
1.词数100左右;      2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;w_w*w.k_s*5_u.c_o m
3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)
Good morning ,everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “thoughts on becoming a grown-up”.
                                                                  
                                                                    
                                                                      
                                                                         
Thank you for listening .
【写作要点】本文要求写一篇成人仪式上的英语发言稿。开头结尾均已给出。对写作内容也有了明确的要求:①过去对成年的向往 ②现在对已成年的感受和认识 ③成年的我将来的目标及措施。注意:写作要点齐全,要包括规定的三方面内容;注意时态的变化。w_w*w.k_s*5_u.c_o m
【参考范文】
Good morning , everyone !
The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up .”
As a child , I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked . Now I’m a grown-up , but I find things do not go as I expected . Although I can enjoy more freedom , at the same time I realized that being a grown-up not only means this , but also more responsibilities . I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful . To reach the goal , I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university .       (106words)
Thank you for your listening .
内容要点
1.过去对成年的向往;2.现在的感受;3.现在的认识;4.将来的目标;5.要采取的措施。
 
15.天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:
● 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处等)
●个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)
●你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One , Senior Two . I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English . Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation . Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along with the students and benefit the whole school .
I’m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I ‘ve won several prizes in English contests . So I think that I’m qualified for the position .
I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need . Besides , I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs , playing games and so on .
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
 
16.2010新课标全国卷
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

英语演讲比赛
主题:人与自然
时间:6月15日下午2:00-5:00
地点:501教室
参赛选手:10名学生
联系人:李华(电话44876655)
欢迎大家光临

       注意:词数100左右。
Dear Ms. Smith,
                                                                                  
                                                                                                                                                     
With best wishes,
                                                     Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ms. Smith,
I'm Li Hua , the chair of the Students’ Union of Yucai Middle School , which is close to your university . I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15 . It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you . Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions .
I am looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes,
Li Hua
 
17.浙江卷
最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午,不顾天气的炎热,为班级选购歌咏比赛服装),用英语为班级板报写一篇100—120个词的短文。
     你的文章应包括下列要点:
李越的事迹及其对同学的影响;
你的评论。
注意:1. 文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。
参考词汇:singing contest 歌咏比赛         costume 服装www.ks*5u.co
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week ” for what she did for our class . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
                    Star Student of the Week
     Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest . While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms , she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting . Finally , she found the right clothes . Deeply moved by her efforts , we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest .
     Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class . Besides , she often devotes her spare time to helping others . She deserves the honor and we should learn from her . 
 
18.重庆卷
假设你是李华,于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。
信件要点包括:
陈述写信原因
简要描述该行李
说明其重要性
期待回复并表示感谢
注意:
1. 词数100左右。2. 信件格式已给出。3. 请在答题卡上作答。
【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节,为半开放性写作。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写的是对箱子的描述。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】(1 )
Dear Sir/Madam ,
I’m Li Hua . I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010 . But when I came to my home , I found I lost a suitcase . I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back .
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip . There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it . It is really important for me , because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card , passport and so on . Besides , it is what my father sent to me on my birthday .
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply .
                                                          Yours truly,
                                                            Li Hua
【参考范文】(2 )
Dear Sir/Madam ,
I am very sorry to say that I left my suitcase in flight number BA793 on 3 rd , June , so I am writing this letter to ask you for help .The lost suitcase is a red one with a long handle . It is of great importance to me . In it are some valuable books and my credit cards . I will be very grateful if anyone of you contact me by telephone immediately after seeing it . My telephone number is 133456 . There is nothing more gratifying to me than your reply .
I am looking forward to your reply .
                                                            Yours truly,
                                                            Li Hua
【范文点评】文章要点齐全,写作层次清晰,紧扣要点框架并适当添加细节,行文连贯,句式多变,能够正确运用各种复合句,对箱子的描述恰当得体。
 
 
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